this pretty girl has given me such a headache when thinking about her clothes.... first it started as something similar to Mint's (from Tales of Phantasia) healer's uniform, but it gradually swifted to be something that reminds me about ragnarok online's mage and sage.... although it's not fanart, of course.
I specially like that gear on her knee ^^ I don't quite remember how the theme became "clockworks", because it was "mage/summoner/dragon" at first instance ^^UUUU i don't know how that world sphere came to my mind, now i think a big gear would have been better
An excellent drawing; you've asked for an advanced critique, but there isn't anything I can observe that needs adjusting. Her outfit is great, she looks properly proportioned and the clock theme is awesome.
One extremely minor suggestion:
You could lower her left ear (left, from her perspective) just a tad.
thanks for paying attention to the critique message, not many people do ^^U in fact, i think i lost my sight from that ear with all those details, thanks to point it out ^^U and in fact i think i lost a little perspective, it was'nt intentional than one foot is a little more moved forward than the other ^^U
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One extremely minor suggestion:
You could lower her left ear (left, from her perspective) just a tad.
Other than that, superb drawing.
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